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Re: A Response to the Bet
I only wrote the list and a few sentences of my opinion, I apologize for not mentioning what the bet is, (i wrote it in a hurry) a giant mistake ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Suicide Note Of The Weak
I am going to keep this short, i have only a few minutes to write. good writing, i would expand but the doownside..... what a debbie downer.
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: They (Waking Up Dead.)
Other than grammatically i have no issue with my poem as it is about a condition that i actually have where my spine doesn't connect to my brain, it is ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Paradise
dude this has some potential but how are you going to continue the story if hes blown to hell? Try to continue it a different way just check up on ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Blithe Bereavement - CH 1
Slowly but surely, she was became “The Girl In The Attic” needs to be "slowly but surely she had become "the girl in the attic" LOrd olAF
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Vulnerable
that was a cool poem i liked the name to and the line we are subject to lifes diseases
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Sister child
*quote* a perfeCt start not perfet start had to point it out
Jan 7, 2009
