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Lord Olaf

  • Other » General, General Re: A Response to the Bet

    I only wrote the list and a few sentences of my opinion, I apologize for not mentioning what the bet is, (i wrote it in a hurry) a giant mistake ...

    Feb 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suicide Note Of The Weak

    I am going to keep this short, i have only a few minutes to write. good writing, i would expand but the doownside..... what a debbie downer.

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: They (Waking Up Dead.)

    Other than grammatically i have no issue with my poem as it is about a condition that i actually have where my spine doesn't connect to my brain, it is ...

    Feb 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Paradise

    dude this has some potential but how are you going to continue the story if hes blown to hell? Try to continue it a different way just check up on ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blithe Bereavement - CH 1

    Slowly but surely, she was became “The Girl In The Attic” needs to be "slowly but surely she had become "the girl in the attic" LOrd olAF

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vulnerable

    that was a cool poem i liked the name to and the line we are subject to lifes diseases

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sister child

    *quote* a perfeCt start not perfet start had to point it out

    Jan 7, 2009


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